Score: 4

"How many voice actors are there again?"

submission: Captain R: Game Ranger 3

date: December 13, 2009

However many there are, there ain't enough. I got the impression that it was at least three dudes at most doing ALL the voices. at least this was better than the others, but it isn't a commendable improvement.
Try to improve some more, and I'll give you a better score and review, until then, this is the dude addicted to flash, signing out.

-End Transmission.

Score: 5

"Sonic and Shadow"

submission: Captain R: Game Ranger 2b

date: December 13, 2009

More specifically, Shadow. He alone redemed this episode enough for me to give that a five. Everything before that, is complete fail, especially the rape. Good god that was horrendously stupid. I'll pretend everything before Sonic and Shadow showed up never happened. My previous complaints stand, with apparent exceptions for Sonic and Shadow.

Questions? Comments? Comebacks? Flames? PM me.

-End Transmission-

Score: 3

"*is not amused*"

submission: Captain R: Game Ranger 2a

date: December 13, 2009

You lack the skill to get away with ripping off Kingdom Hearts' opening. Do NOT rip off KH. That turned me off the moment I saw it and ticked me off. If you're going to do it, do it RIGHT. I can understand paradies, but if you can't make it work, it's a complete failure.
Also, really? Could the voice acting be any worse than it is?
You're lucky you aren't swamped with MJ fan flames for insulting him like that.
Also, why the fuck is that guy dressed up like Peter Pan? Was that truly necessary? Couldn't you have found something a little more...fitting? Really, just...no.
Here's a tip, abuse of curse words does not equal comedy. It can be funny for a couple of minutes before it just becomes annoying.
At least the music and animation is decent, but honestly, that's the only redeeming factor here. -_-;

If you have any complaints, comebacks, or arguments, do not hesitate to contact me through PM.

-End Transmission-

Score: 4

"Yeah...no."

submission: Captain R: Game Ranger EX

date: December 13, 2009

Look, here's a tip from someone who's seen a lot of flashes and machinima with voice-acting: Try emotion. It helps if your actors show emotion, otherwise you get this. Extremely bland and rather uninteresting voice-acting that tends to drag down the quality of the flash/machinima. I cannot, in all good sense, give you a high rating for this. I'll see what the others look like, but I'm not impressed with this 'remake'.
Overall animation though, was rather decent, not impressive, but decent. Not bad enough to complain, but not good enough to compliment.
Music choices, on the other hand, were exquisite and I loved them.

My overall opinion is that it really needs a bit more work on animation and voice-acting. I hope to see improvement in later episodes.

Wish to defend yourself? Feel free to PM me at any time, and I'll get back to you.

-End Transmission-

Score: 10

"Fantastic work!"

submission: Stamp on the Ground

date: September 14, 2009

I'm in awe of your ability, and I have truly enjoyed this flash!

Score: 10

"Truly impressive!"

submission: Rise of the Brotherhood 4

date: September 9, 2009

Criticism:
1. The craters when Sonic and Mettalix Prime made when they landed did not 'stick' to the terrain and shook when the frame was moving.

2. The rocks at that cave the Desert Dweller used to seal Tails in, don't make them visible like that, it looked wrong.

3. As an earlier reviewer said, Sonic's voice tended to lack emotion.

4. If I do remember correctly, 'Sonniku' is the name Amy affectionately calls Sonic. If this is an intentional name used to call Sonic's ancester, well, I can't give you any points to that. It sounds idiotic and rather unoriginal.

Compliments:

1. Your impovement since the beginning of the series is noticable. I really like how the fight scenes came out.

2. My compliments to your voice actors, they do a fine job.

3. I LOVE Tails' attitude, you could turn it into a running gag 'cause it's rather funny.

4. At the rate you're improving, there's a good chance you may just end up rivaling Alvin-Earthworm.

5. Love the reference to Sonic SATam. I like the idea of using it as a way to make a backstory for Sonic's ancestry. Very original and I like it.

Personal message:
I love this series and I appreciate you PM'ing me about the release of this part. I can't wait for the next part to come out!
P.S. I do mean the last bit on the compliments. If you don't know who he is, he's the creator of SMBZ, which is found on this site.

-End Transmission-

Score: 10

"Adorable! ^w^"

submission: Love-A Story.

date: April 14, 2009

I have happily fav'd this truly adorable and touching flash animation, and I'll be looking up the original creator on DA to see the rest of her gallery! This truly is an amazing work of art, and I'm glad I decided to watch it.

10/10
5/5

Score: 9

"Great game."

submission: Zombie War

date: April 12, 2009

Some minor quirks like horrible lag once you have a lot of soldiers/zombies/both on the screen, and once you got the cannon and wall upgrades, all you have to do is hold down space and build a wall while spamming soldiers behind it to catch whatever you missed.
But yeah, great game, sandbox mode would be a great addition, as well as the ability to go back to the title screen once the game is over instead of closing and re-opening the game.

But yeah, my strategy for the game: Get the soldiers' upgrades, increased firing rate, body armor, decrease time it takes to get more on the field, then get the wall upgrade, once you do that, build a wall, spam soldiers behind it, and if you have a hill, put it at the bottom or near the bottom for walls block grenades, once you do that, try to get the cannon upgrad asap, 'cause it has long range and can 'push' the zombies into groups allowing you to take out a large number of zombies quickly, in fact, never adjust the cannon's aim from its original position, just keep firing, you'll only get one, maybe up to three, zombies every now and then that managed to be missed by the cannon, these zombies can be handled by your soldiers, just keep that wall up, and five normal soldiers, and you are completely invincible!

Score: 10

"Excellent! Such remarkable improvement!"

submission: Rise of the Brotherhood 3

date: March 30, 2009

You have most definitely made impressive amounts of improvement in this part. While you still have the basic issues of spelling and grammor and matching what you say, and the the text reads, you have improved dramatically. Your sound synching has been perfected, the speed has been fixed, and now flows with the situation better than it did before, and your action sequences are better than ever. For such improvement I give you the full rating. I do hope that the next part will show even more improvement, or at least not make the same mistakes as the earlier parts have. Strive to fix the errors, and you shall soon be as much a household name such as Alvin Earthworm or Kirbopher! 5/5

-Ultima, out-

Score: 8

"Interesting."

submission: Rise of the brotherhood 2

date: March 30, 2009

Your synching has improved, but like everyone else has mentioned, make Sheathe a little more custom, so he doesn't look like Mephiles, I actually thought he WAS Mephiles when he first showed up in the prequal. As usual, you have issues matching the text to the voices, and you keep on forgetting to capitalize 'I' when it is by itself, instead you put 'i', which is grammatically incorrect. Other than that, this seems worth keeping an eye on, keep up the good work, and strive to improve on the faults of this series. 4/5

-Ultima, out-